Say it early, once, in plain terms, with the reason and the date. Burying it or over-explaining both make the reaction worse than the change.

The reaction is to the telling

Most customers accept a price increase, a dropped service, or a changed process without much difficulty.

What they react badly to is discovering it, being told after it happened, or reading four paragraphs of justification that make it sound like something is being hidden.

So the announcement is not an unfortunate necessity around the change; it is the part that determines the outcome.

A change announced well is merely administrative, and the same change announced badly becomes a grievance.

The five things it has to contain

Five short sentences will cover almost every single announcement a small business ever needs to make. Anything longer is usually justification, and justification reads as apology, which invites negotiation.

Lead with the change

Which is the structural decision.

Most people write three paragraphs of context and put the change at the bottom, because the change is the uncomfortable part.

The reader skims to find it, does not find it, and reads the whole thing suspiciously.

Put it in the first line: prices are rising by this much from this date, or we are no longer offering this service after this date.

Then the reason, then the practicalities.

That ordering reads as confident and the reverse reads as evasive, and the change is identical.

Give one reason, not four

Which is the discipline that keeps it credible.

One honest reason is believed and four assembled reasons sound like an argument being constructed.

Costs have risen, the supplier stopped making it, we cannot deliver it well enough to keep offering it: each is sufficient on its own.

Avoid blaming things nobody can verify, and avoid the phrase about circumstances beyond our control, which says nothing and is recognised as saying nothing.

Where the reason is simply that the old price was too low, saying that plainly is more respected than any invented explanation.

People know what things cost, and an honest reason is easier to accept than a constructed one.

It is also easier to repeat consistently when somebody asks about it later.

A worked example

A service business raised prices for the first time in four years.

The first draft ran to five paragraphs about market conditions and commitment to quality.

The version sent said prices were rising by a stated amount from a stated date, that they had not changed since 2019, that existing bookings were honoured at the old rate, and who to contact with questions.

Four customers replied and none complained.

Two said they were surprised the prices had held that long.

The five-paragraph version would have invited a conversation the four-sentence version did not.

Give notice proportionate to the change

Which is what separates a change from an imposition.

A price rise wants weeks rather than days, so anybody with work planned can decide.

A discontinued service wants longer, since somebody may need to find an alternative.

Honouring anything already booked or quoted at the old terms costs little and removes most of the objection.

Say that explicitly rather than leaving people to ask, since the person who has to ask has already become annoyed.

Announcing on the day it takes effect is the version that generates complaints regardless of how well it is written.

Tell everybody at once

Which prevents the worst version of this.

A change communicated to some customers and not others produces the situation where somebody finds out from another customer.

Send it to the whole list, put it on the site, and brief anybody answering the telephone before it goes out.

That last point matters, since a customer telephoning about the email and reaching somebody who has not heard about it is the failure that turns a change into a story.

An hour of preparation prevents a fortnight of awkward telephone calls.

Send the internal version a day early rather than the same morning.

Do not ask for agreement

Which is a tonal point that decides how it is received.

Phrases like we hope you understand, we trust this will not cause inconvenience, and we appreciate your patience all invite a reply about whether they do understand.

State the change, offer to answer questions, and stop.

Confidence in an announcement is not arrogance; it is the absence of an invitation to negotiate something already decided.

If the decision is genuinely open, that is a different message and should say so.

Put it somewhere permanent as well

Which handles everybody who was not on the list when the message went out.

An email reaches your existing customers and does nothing for the person who finds you in February and is working from a price they saw somewhere else.

Update the website, the listing, and any printed material on the same day the announcement goes out rather than a fortnight later.

A short note on the relevant page saying prices changed on a given date is enough, and it stops the conversation before it starts.

The most common version of this failure is a website still showing last year's prices three months after everybody was told they had risen.

The counter-case

Some changes need more.

Anything affecting a contract, a regulated service, or a long-term arrangement may have notice requirements and needs proper treatment rather than a short email.

A major customer also warrants a telephone call before the general announcement, which is courtesy rather than communication.

And some changes genuinely do benefit from explanation, particularly where a customer will otherwise assume the worst about why.

Judge that by whether silence would be actively misread, rather than by how uncomfortable the change feels to announce.

Lead with the change, give one reason, give proportionate notice, honour what is booked, and tell everybody at once.

What to do

  1. Write the change in one sentence.
  2. Put it first.
  3. Give one reason.
  4. State the date.
  5. Honour existing bookings.
  6. Brief the telephone first.
  7. Do not ask for agreement.

Step six is the one that gets skipped and causes the most trouble, since a customer calling about an announcement and reaching somebody who has not seen it turns an administrative change into a story.

The public version of this is covered in answering a complaint in public.


Frequently asked questions

What are people reacting to?

The telling rather than the change. Most customers accept a price rise; they react to discovering it, being told afterwards, or reading four paragraphs of justification.

What should the announcement contain?

What is changing, when it takes effect, why in one sentence, what they should do, and who to ask. Five sentences covers almost everything.

Where should the change go?

In the first line. Most people put it at the bottom after three paragraphs of context, and the reader skims suspiciously looking for it.

How many reasons?

One. An honest reason is believed and four assembled reasons sound like an argument being constructed. Avoid circumstances beyond our control.

How much notice?

Weeks for a price rise, longer for a discontinued service. Honour anything already booked at the old terms and say so explicitly.

What should I avoid saying?

We hope you understand, we trust this will not inconvenience you, we appreciate your patience. Each invites a reply about whether they do understand.

West Coast Media Solutions Inc. provides web design, web development, hosting, digital marketing, and business consulting to organisations across Canada, drawing on more than twenty-five years in the field.

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